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Tuesday, January 13, 2009

My Poem

ok so, my mom is going through this thing where she thinks that i am not creative enough she made me wright a poem this is what i wrote tell me what you think


Silently sits the sky
All pinks and golds
birds fly
the wind softly blows
truly this is a dying day


do you like it thank god she did!!

6 comments:

Seth said...

okay, that took me a minute to figure out. good, though.

Jessie said...

I like it i has a certain something to it.. Why does your Mom think that? Have you suddenly started doing something really out there??

ttyl

Kansas said...

i dont know!!!!

Sarah said...

man i wish my mom thought i had that problem...i could do this stuff all day

Angel Wings said...

It would be better if it was more descriptive...But I like it...I'm good at writing...even though I have an average grade in English...

Kansas said...

yeah i kinda suck